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Hate the rage
Love the fury
Need a stage
To release my worry
Bottled thoughts
Boiling feelings
Cheep shots
Rotten dealings
Energy to acquit
Storms I have to calm
need a place to fit
Need to belong
Shadow of the past
finds a new beginning
Leave my side at last
Before I start descending
Turn me inside out
find a tortured core
See what pain's about
Watch the blood begin to pour
Redirect this anger
Make it bloom into art
Dodge all the danger
Before I fall apart
Memory burns like acid
plan goes up in smoke
I gotta get past it
I'm just about to choke
clear view seems unconfirmed
Waist away for sake of injustice
Too long I've been concerned
Damn, I just don't trust this
Life appears in such a pretty package
But the gift is so deceiving
I wish I could turn back a page
And find something worth believing
©2005-2009 ~purplethorn
:iconpurplethorn:

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:icondeviantteddybear:
Whoa. Scary, one hopes it wasn't written recently.

--
I want you to want me
I need you to need me
I'd love you to love me
I'm beggin' you to be me

I shine up my old brown shoes
I put on brand new shirt
I'll get home early from work
If you'll say, that you love me

- Letters to Cleo
:iconkradcoven:
Wow. This has an amazing pattern to the poem. I am always afraid to have things rymn too much, but you used that kind of pattern to create amazing imagry. I have to applaude you on this great work. The emotions in this peice come across very easily to the reader.
:iconpurplethorn:
Thank you very much. That makes me feel good. :euphoria:

--
-all you can do in this lifetime is live time and pray
-whatever you want wants you back
:iconkradcoven:
You're very welcome. I have a bunch of other peoms by you to comment on. I just wish I wasn't at work so I could give them the time they deserve.

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